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2014, 6*, appearance, Batman, buildings, chimney, dialogue, doing, emptiness, pointlessness, reaching, Robin, rooftops, society
al ways
on a
c u rve
blocks of building arise from the Batman
decoding to Robin
the lives of modern civilisation
despite all dialogue
but using all appearance
the duo point
like retrievers
ever on a cornice ever by chimney where
reach is capped and hidden
from its own point
and ever ready to step full
into the implicit abyss
which is never there
————w(O)rmholes________________________________|—–
Batman wormhole: ‘anyway / is it all just / a dream?’
buildings & chimney wormhole: Plumstead – Woolwich – Plumstead 290508 – / the breath of London
doing wormhole: tong // len
emptiness wormhole: – sigh! –
pointlessness wormhole: stuck free to move within
Robin wormhole: a maturity
rooftops wormhole: Plumstead – Woolwich 121114
society wormhole: Dr Strange IV – ellipses
Rhino House said:
Shades of Lewis C. & the Cheshire cat. Loved it.
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m lewis redford said:
thanks, man
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Holistic Wayfarer said:
I like the alliteration with the blocks of building and the way the Duo features here. I smiled the moment I saw the poem. Can you guess why? *grin*
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m lewis redford said:
aha; homework …
‘but that i am happiest
(clap hand over mouth)
when my dreams find their light in the words …’
(lips contract around a quiet ‘ooh’) but
it’s the spacin g s and line-
breaks and s c a tt e r e d down across the page
good to find a fellow scatterer
(I have often thought – stay with me now – that there is more space than matter between the atoms in a wall and the atoms in a body, so that if we could align the space in our body so that it wouldn’t collide with the spaces in the wall while we walk through it then nothing would matter anymore;
‘but we can’t align our body-spaces to dodge the space of a wall’ I hear you sob while feeding the kids …
ah, but yes we can: through the words we use and the way we
arrange
them
on
the page!
… places food in the toddler’s ear …)
live well and prosper \\//
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