Alan Turing
stood sat be
fore the ma
chine he was
bigger than
the machine
he was small
er than the
machine to
the right w
heels turn
ed and stop
ped to the
left they
stopped
and turned
above they
did nothing
then they
turned and
lights lit up
he was a he
ro but un
known he
was in
decent and
state-order
ed castrated
The Imitation Game (2014); director: Morten Tyldum; actors: Benedict Cumberbatch, Keira Knightley
————w(O)rmholes________________________________|—–
identity wormhole: Buddha Amitabha
society wormhole: never there
war wormhole: tag cloud poem VI – anyone’s eyes
Marcy Erb said:
Fantastic poem – I thought the movie was very good – saw it last month in a sold out theatre (which is what you get when you see a movie about the father of computer programing in a theatre across the street from MIT). I’d love to illustrate this poem and put it on Illustrated Poetry!
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m lewis redford said:
I would be honoured – thank you so much for this response
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Marcy Erb said:
Great! I will be in touch in the next couple of weeks with a draft of the illustration.
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Laura M. said:
I love the way this poem takes us (the reader) over: our eyes scrolling the text totally at your whim, just cogs in your diabolical poetic machine. I’m not being very articulate and I haven’t seen the movie but I really dig the poem.
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m lewis redford said:
articulate or not, I got every word of your comment; that you read so closely is a wonderful gift to me – thank you
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