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1978, bedroom, blue, brother, childhood, Eglinton Hill, glass, John, laughing, mauve, morning, pyjamas, rain, reading, shadow, smile, sun, thought, windows, yellow
up floated the printed words
lengthening shadows on the page
light rain fell
small mauve sparks
sprayed from the crack
in the bedroom window
charging my smiling brother
in his yellow and blue pyjamas
laughing in the morning sun
between thoughts
————w(O)rmholes________________________________|—–
bedroom wormhole: where the goblins leered – poewieview #14
blue & sun wormhole: too late:
childhood wormhole: 1968
Eglinton Hill & glass wormhole: the start of adolescence
mauve wormhole: being in love – poewieview #26
morning wormhole: work
rain & windows wormhoe: fine
reading wormhole: b / r / e / a / t / h / i / n / g
shadow wormhole: impressionism
smile wormhole: B le tch l ey P ark
thought wormhole: dry rot
yellow wormhole: stacked
Thanks very much for contacting me on The Writing Garden Mark! I would love to publish this poem in the next issue if that’s okay with you? Kind of reminds me of my older brother and click-clacky vintage typewriters! 😉
Let me know if you’d like any other social media or links for books published in addition to your website and I’ll add them to your credit.
Suzy 🙂
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I am honoured; thank you for reading;
I have no other produce to refer
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Thank you Mark, that will be great. Will get back to you when it’s published! 🙂
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Just passing to let you know your poetry has been published in The Writing Garden. https://thewritinggarden.wordpress.com/2016/07/16/the-writing-garden-issue-ten/ Please let me know if anything is incorrect and I’ll put it in order asap. Thanks so much for both your poems!! 🙂
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Thank you so much, Suzy; I have posted a link to the magazine
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