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1951, 2014, 6*, air, black, cars, clouds, grass, green, grey, leaves, listening, loneliness, moon, ocean, passing, pine, pink, sky, sound, speech, Sylvia Plath, talking, trees, white, writing
Cocktails in 1951
down below, that half-curious
half-comical world on the terrace
up here the air blurs the syllables
of conversation like sky-writing
from a clear pencilled line to a
puffy cloud; green of grass
grey of ocean and a deepening
sky faintly pink; always a roaring
of sound, cars whirring along
the turnpike; the moon, now,
over the green-black tops of pines
chalkily white, third quarter lunar phase sphere
amputated optically and neatly;
below a thick voice, “The moon’s out.”
The reply ravels and threads
on the leaves and is lost to you
dug into, dug up, found, carefully dusted off and pieced together from entry 87. of The Journals of Sylvia Plath, 1950-1962, but written by Sylvia Plath before the moon really came out
————w(O)rmholes________________________________|—–
air wormhole: and I lose sight of her into memory
black wormhole: slightly / uphill
cars wormhole: a nice grey woollen picnic blanket
clouds & pine wormhole: volcanic rock
green & trees wormhole: Tara mantras
grey wormhole: ‘charcoal grey-slate sky …’
leaves & moon wormhole: between
listening & talking wormhole: reating & wriding
loneliness wormhole: wakeoutofadream
passing wormhole: duty free // chastened
pink wormhole: pink and orange
sky wormhole: good going into / that gentle night
sound wormhole: place
speech wormhole: h’rk ‘eh ‘heh ‘hair ‘yeah ‘eh?
Sylvia Plath wormhole: ‘God, who am I …?’
white wormhole: greedy
writing wormhole: is there anything to write?
One wonder’s which
of the contronymous
meanings of ravel
she meant….
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just so, just so – there are the filaments of the twilight poem
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Ripe with
juicy
ambiguity.
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… wriggle room
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