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'scape, 2017, 5*, breeze, duck, letting go, light, notice, perspective, reflection, Sheffield Park Gardens, sky, sound, surface
noticing and letting go – the breeze
skates the water
reflecting the sky
of light above the landscape along
the further shore
revolves to the accompaniment of
ducks chuckling about
on the surface
————w(O)rmholes________________________________|—–
breeze wormhole: The Boats of Vallisneria by Michael J. Redford – Making Hay
letting go wormhole: hold them
light & sound wormhole: {Ellen Terry’s house}
reflection wormhole: all the sandstone / reflections in the / marble-blue troughs
sky wormhole: polystyrene / boulderscape
mlewisredford 
I really like how the word “skates” works in this poem.
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thank you, Shelley, there was a lot floating on that word
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ducks chuckling about
on the surface
oh my. oh my. oh my.
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oh yes
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I really enjoy your “wormholes” — was fun to come back and read this one again.
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thank you, thank you, Audra – puts me in mind of what Einstein said that if you could look infinitely far in a straight direction you would see the back of your own head – wormholes are a great help in this
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