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'scape, 1981, 6*, bed, blog, buildings, Carol, clouds, green, grey, lightning, London, love, marriage, Plumstead, red, seagull, Shooters Hill, silence, sky, smoke, Thames, time, wind
she shook the sweets
onto the bed
the grey sky
washed clean
metal smoke rose
then right-angled
a seagull
flew between the buildings
then
lightning
{the sweets were Lindt chocolates, individually wrapped in deep-red; the made bed was covered by a deep-green candlewick bed-spread; she was Carol, shortly before or after we were married, staying in what had been my bedroom, halfway up Shooters Hill, overlooking the Thames basin; this was the first poem I published on this blog, almost exactly ten years ago, and, in those early days, she got very little … no views; I think she deserves more than that; want a sweet?}
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buildings & red & Thames wormhole: travel // when I die
Carol wormhole: ‘don’t look at it …’
clouds wormhole: here today and …
green & sky & time wormhole: meanwhile
grey wormhole: ‘charcoal grey-slate sky …’
lightning wormhole: a crack of lightning / in the dark of night
London wormhole: Lapping Reflections [Deep Within Waters] – tenderness
love wormhole: IN THE ‘SCONSET BUS by William Carlos Williams
Plumstead wormhole: Plumstead – Woolwich – Plumstead 220211
seagull wormhole: The Atlantic City Convention: 1. THE WAITRESS by William Carlos Williams
silence wormhole: silence
wind wormhole: Lapping Reflections [Deep Within Waters] – valley
Ten years!? Nice….
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Y’know, you’re right to put that question mark after ‘Ten years!’ … it’s actually nine years, I thought suddenly while trying to get to sleep last night: 2011 to 2020 is nine years; my haste to be eventful messed with my numeracy … groan
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Still. Kudos on writing for 9 years.
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Sweet! I didn’t start blogging until 2012. Makes me think about going back to revisit my original post. I think I wrote something like “this page intentionally left blank”
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Ha! Then:
“The author, the Writer’s Shadow, asserts the moral right to be identified as the author of this work.
(C) 2012
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